Filmed focus attmept 2 and story board.

Okay so my first filmed focus sucked. Dont lie you know it did. So i decided to do a different one on my own to explain my idea more and also show you my story board i have drawn up as i explain my idea. I will be putting this video on facebook to get public feedback on my ideas and to gain interest and also be able to improve my idea on my audiences point of view.